Wednesday 29 June 2016

Rain, Rain, Rain!

Due to the awful rain yesterday and our classrooms nearly flooding we decided to write our own poems about the rain. Here are some of our finished pieces.

Fine

Rain is a liquid
And it looks so small
It soaks you right through
No one is allowed in the rain


Lola 

Rain, rain, beautiful rain heading down the drain
A good day can turn into a bad day all because of rain!
I love the rain because it's fresh
Not nice rain because it is cold
I love the rain 
No one can stop the rain
Go away rain

Lorelai

Rain is
A liquid
It feels wet
Now it has dried up
It is raining again and it has flooded
Now it has dried up so we can 
Go outside and play

Vicky
Rain is here, it is a liquid
A raindrop goes through the water cycle
I need a umbrella to keep dry!
Need gumboots too
If I have a raincoat I can put that on to
Normally there won't be a flood

Devon

Rain is a liquid
Air is oxygen
It feels wet
Never ending bullets on the roof
It flooded at the front
No going outside
Go inside and play

Suki

Rain is hammering on your roof 
A lot of rain is falling like a waterfall
I have never seen a flood have you?
New rain, old rain, rain is fun!

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